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|Subject: Willtofly please edit your post : Wed Jun 17, 2009 6:47 am|| |
'will to fly', twice now you have pulled the characters to seraphs tribe when only he was going. in previous posts the others had left to find Solen's tribe. The first time Paxel: the icy manipulator edited it for you. please read previous posts carefully before making your own.
P.S. if you are about to attack me for my lack of posts lately, know this. It is because I am unable to follow the storyline since it has no conherence from post to post lately.
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|Subject: Re: Willtofly please edit your post :\ Wed Jun 17, 2009 6:53 pm|| |
I am afraid that I have to agree with fewmets.
When I said that you tell the story while focusing on your character, I DID state that you must still follow the storyline. Also, do not post anything that was NOT stated in the previous posts.
I have taken you into consideration, being that every time I post I TRY to correct the storyline. You might ask why you can't see that. The answer is simple; I do not include the correction because it will be too auspicious.
I have given fewmets her position not because of any stupid and non-feasible reason. I gave her the position because english is her first language and she has a fluent tongue.
No one has a right to flame/annoy her because of this post, this is because of the rules imposed, and those which you agreed to follow upon registration on this site.
While we're on the topic, I would like to inject a small request.
I would like to request that, if possible, each poster try his/her best to examine his/her grammar before submitting the final post. Sure you can edit it later, but it would not only save you time but offer the satisfaction of a job well done.
AM I UNDERSTOOD?